An exhausting weekend. However, it is exhauting a wondrful and memorable experience. After a long time through the day at home, must be lazy when going to school. Just like saturday, I felttired and it did not want to go to school. However, because they have to take my diploma finally go to school.
After taking a diploma, as always me andmy best frend play or take pictures arounnd the Tugu Muda to eliminate fatigue. Before we start take pictures, we buy soft drink in the traditionalmarket.
kind of style we capture. because it's tired, we decided to go home. While we were waiting for a bus, across the street, I seea line of police officers who play musical instrument. My bestfriend and I come to see it. Apparetly, the parade batik. It was like being at Disneyland, Hongkong. Luckily we were able to photograph.
Then, we came home with good feeling.
reviewer: M.N. Rizal
BalasHapus1. penulisan "wondrful" seharusnya "wonderful"
2. penulisan "because" seharusnya "Because" karena awal kalimat.
3. membiongungkan karena grammarnya sembrawut, google translate y mbak????????????? :D
4. liyane nyusul bro :D
reviewer : nihayatul f
BalasHapus1. hhaha, tulisannya ada yang salah mbah,..
"wondrful" kurang "e" tuh,harusnya kan "wonderful"
2. hhaaha,..
serba salah o,.. "kind" diawal kalimat kan "k" nya harus pakai huruf kapital
3 "take pictures" kayaknya salah mbah, apa nggak "take a picture"?..
4. ada lagi tuh yang salah nulis, "I seea" apaan tuh?
reviewer: Oky Mita
BalasHapus>iya , ui kurang huruf "e" , masak "wondrful"
>felttired, harusnya di spasi supaya tidak membingungkan,
>However, because they have to take my diploma finally go to school. Pada "have to" seharusnya "had to" .
udah yaa,,